| Finally found my voice; now I just need the strength to use it: slightly abstract, partly scientific, mostly disjointed, completely detached. I attempt to avoid repetition and rhyme, and I love using the dictionary and thesaurus to look up the actual definitions of the words I am using. My inspiration is the emotional struggle we all experience. Rarely do I employ proper capitalization, though I mostly conform to normal punctuation and grammar usage. Any exception is for the purpose of making the poem stronger. If I critique your work, it comes from a desire to share what I think when I read it, and a wish to contribute my vision of how to improve it. My aim is to force you to take a step back from your beloved art and read it from a slightly different point of view. Pore over every word--are they all necessary? This is what I do when I write, so it should not be a stretch to expect it of you as well. Please keep in mind that this is highly subjective, and you may agree or disagree with my comments as you wish. |




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The 3rd
Master Rob
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