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Finally found my voice; now I just need the strength to use it: slightly abstract, partly scientific, mostly disjointed, completely detached. I attempt to avoid repetition and rhyme, and I love using the dictionary and thesaurus to look up the actual definitions of the words I am using. My inspiration is the emotional struggle we all experience. Rarely do I employ proper capitalization, though I mostly conform to normal punctuation and grammar usage. Any exception is for the purpose of making the poem stronger.


If I critique your work, it comes from a desire to share what I think when I read it, and a wish to contribute my vision of how to improve it. My aim is to force you to take a step back from your beloved art and read it from a slightly different point of view. Pore over every word--are they all necessary? This is what I do when I write, so it should not be a stretch to expect it of you as well. Please keep in mind that this is highly subjective, and you may agree or disagree with my comments as you wish.
I have found a different voice for my poetry, and this may be the one that defines all my past, present, and (most importantly!) future work. Maybe it comes from figuring out how to throw myself back into that same emotional and mental state that usually accompanies my writing. Perhaps it is because I have a lot more free time this semester and I can take a minute or sixty to just breathe.

I must credit oneword . com for this. For whatever reason, their one-word-prompts have been inspirational and life-changing. Also, I am finally coming to know and understand myself. I feel as though I say this all the time, but I believe I am always discovering myself, perpetually reinventing, forever deconstructing and rebuilding.

Many props as well to the Decker computer lab at BCC for providing a somewhat distraction-free space in which to ponder and write--well, as uninterrupted as I can be with the entire internet in front of me. And don't forget to mention the cute girls. Ha!

In addition, I am downloading more music that I have for a long while been meaning to give a listen. Twilight Singers have skyrocketed to the top of my list.


P.S. I have entered the "Prompted to Write" contest. My entry is: art can expand space. Wish me luck, and then enter as well, until (I believe) April 15th.

Go forth, young disciples! Make it so!

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  • Current Residence: Binghamton, NY
  • Skin of choice: smooth
  • Favourite game: playing "real life" jeopardy
  • Favourite cartoon character: Samurai Jack
  • Personal Quote: "it's only after we've lost everything that we're free to do anything."
  • Tools of the Trade: sarcasm, indifference, procrastination

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:iconladyilliana:
I find myself missing our chats. Are you still around?

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"Where the spirit does not work with the hand, there is no art." ~ Leonardo Da Vinci

Don't judge me by my art...oh, wait, yeah...my art is my soul...hmm...sorry if I scare you! ~me!
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:iconpardonm3:
I miss you; come back! I've been finding myself again.
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:iconpardonm3:
Let's be workshop buddies. It'll keep us both writing regularly.
Let me know and I can note you my email.
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:iconrlyiii3rd:
~Rlyiii3rd Sep 23, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
thanks for the watch

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The 3rd

Master Rob
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:iconpardonm3:
Thank you for adding Storm-chasing to your favorites a long, long time ago.

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:iconblessgirl:
thanks PM for your kind words. you're always entertaining to read. and i'm always grateful for support from my unseen friends:)
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